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wypracowanko(mini) z anglika , MTY 22/04/04 17:46
czy moglby ktos sprawdzic moje wypociny napisane po angielsku bo chce sie upewnic czy nie ma tam za duzo bledow :)
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Few years ago(that was 1998 I think) I went with my friends(Radek and Piotrek) to Lasek Północny to learn Piotrek how to ride a bicycle. We started from the basics: How to maintain balance, becouse without that skill Piotrek often poured out. The next thing we learned him, when he could maintain balance quite good was braking and swerving while driving. Piotrek wasn't the best of students and he made a lot of mistakes. He often poured out and two times he even dashed into a tree(although we screemed to him "strand right", "brake" and "look out for that tree"). When he more or less could ride a bicycle we went on a trip to Krępa. While we were in Krępa sudenly it started raining. We hid in the abandoned plot. Meanwhile the thunderstorm started. We were thinking how to get back home when sudenly thunder hit Piotrek's bike which was standing 10 meters from the cabin. We were scared and we phoned our parents to get us from here becouse we were afraid to go back home by ourselfs. Our parents get us,our bikes and what was left from Piotrek's bike from here. We will remenber this story for the rest of our lifes.
dzieki za pomoc :)- Long time ago, in the Galaxy far far away , el chupa 22/04/04 18:00
ten film już znamy haha. Z anglika nie jestem za dobry ale wygląda sensownie. BTW niezły horror z tą burzą. Is it true?*homo homini lupus est* - nie wiekszosc zmyslona , MTY 22/04/04 18:05
ale to o tym ze go uczylismy jezdzic to nie :D - aha , MTY 22/04/04 18:05
i jeszcze jedno :)
na serio wpadl na to drzewa :D
i to nawet 5 razy hehehe - przydaloby sie zeby inni tez to sprawdzili , MTY 22/04/04 18:06
bo chce dostac dobra ocene :) - moze mnie Kenny nie obejezie za niepedagogiczne dzialanie , @kjos 22/04/04 18:31
ale mam ochote napisac posta
a zeby nei bylo tak zupelnie niepedagogicznie to wskaze, gdzie widze bledy a poprawiaj juz sam :))
Article-Few years ago
WrongWord-learn
Spelling-becouse
WrongWord -pour out (radze ostrożnie korzystac ze slownikow Pol-Ang)
WrongWord-learn
WrongWord-good
Punctuation- -good was
WrongWord-swerving (no chyba, ze uczyliscie go jak omijac przeszkody w ostatniej chwili)
Not necessary -of (w of students)
WrongWord - poured out
WrongWord - dash ( a nie mzona by mniej skomplikowanych slow uzywac? sa bezpieczniejsze)
Spelling -screemed
WrongWord - to
WrongWord - strand
Spelling - sudenly
WrongWord - in
WrongWord- plot
WrongWord - here
Spelling -becouse
Spelling - ourselfs
WrongForm - get
WrongWord - here
Spelling - lifes
moze sa jeszcze bledy, ale musze z domu wychodzic, wiec tylko tyle na szybko.....---------------------
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